Hi stella, I like your writing its well set out and i like your background maybe next time you could add a bit more information about what you were learning about but overall i think you have use very instrening words and i think the emotion is excited.
Hi stella,
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Hi Jaz
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Dear Stella, I think I could guess most of your emotions as you did such a good job of showing rather than telling. Cheers
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