We have been writing about our holidays. We had to include one true thing, one made up thing and then give ourselves a character name. Then we made a storyboard about it.
hi my name is Gaitau I like how you used your imagination and I see you used some color as well it makes it pop up and you should work on positioning your characters.
Hi my name is Zara from Paparoa Range School. I like how you put a description about what Room 5 did with our holidays and also i liked how you used your imagination in your storyboard.
it is a nice simple story, love how there is a giant Hummingbird and its very funny because Perfessor Poopy Pants showers with his clothes on
ReplyDeletehi my name is Gaitau I like how you used your imagination and I see you used some color as well it makes it pop up and you should work on positioning your characters.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Zara from Paparoa Range School. I like how you put a description about what Room 5 did with our holidays and also i liked how you used your imagination in your storyboard.
ReplyDeleteHi stella
ReplyDeletei like how you called yourself professor poopy pants i think it funny but i think u did i good job on your storyboard.
by jaz
thank jaz
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