Greetings Stella, My name is Chavda. I am a year 7 and I got to Panmure Bridge School. I really love how you told us what your narrative is about. Did you draw or find the pictures because it looks very stunning.
Hi Chavda, thank you for commenting on my work. I drew the pictures myself. This was the first time I've made a story on a slide and published it to my blog. Thanks from Stella
Kia ora Stella As you may already know my name is Sky and I go to panmure bridge school. This piece of work is amazing and I like the detail you put into it I just think that you may want to work on adding more detail about this dog of your it sound like a really annoying dog and nice work on your drawing.
Hi Sky, thanks for your comment and idea. I'm working on adding more detail and you can look at my new writing about a Pegasus horse and see if you think I've got more detail. thanks from Stella
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ReplyDeleteGreetings Stella,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chavda. I am a year 7 and I got to Panmure Bridge School. I really love how you told us what your narrative is about. Did you draw or find the pictures because it looks very stunning.
KEEP IT UP!!
Hi Chavda, thank you for commenting on my work. I drew the pictures myself. This was the first time I've made a story on a slide and published it to my blog. Thanks from Stella
DeleteKia ora Stella
ReplyDeleteAs you may already know my name is Sky and I go to panmure bridge school. This piece of work is amazing and I like the detail you put into it I just think that you may want to work on adding more detail about this dog of your it sound like a really annoying dog and nice work on your drawing.
Keep the good work up
Sky
Hi Sky, thanks for your comment and idea. I'm working on adding more detail and you can look at my new writing about a Pegasus horse and see if you think I've got more detail. thanks from Stella
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