Tuesday 14 August 2018

Fish's story - my bigger Narrative

In the morning . we do somwthings where we finish a picture and we have to share about it like the name and what it does for a job and where it lives.

We had a fish that we had to roll a dice and see what we ended up with.  Then we told the story of our fish and learned more about writing Narratives.  We were learning about better words to use.

Here's my story.


5 comments:

  1. Greetings Stella,
    Your work sounds Intersing and very spooky. I loved how it has correct punctuation. It's great seeing, that you have blurbs and they also makes sense and tells the readers what is the writing about. I think you need to see if your using the right words. Keep up the hard work!

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    1. Its Okay... Keep up the hard work and effort.. :)

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  4. Kia ora Stella
    Wow this is an amazing piece of work and good on that goldfish for defending himself and shame on that big mean bear

    Keep the good work in enjoying every last one of them.

    Sky

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Thank you for your helpful, positive comment on my work.